Howdy Folks,
Yesterday I
posted on Facebook, in appreciation of the friendship shown there, and here in
the Coffee Clutch we'd have a fun contest for an idea for a story. I asked
folks to share their ideas, and to vote for the one they liked best. We had
over 20 suggestions, lots of fun, and votes. Every idea was terrific, and I
could have never made a choice. We even ended by having a tiebreaker! … My
promise was I'd write the story and post it here today. So Melanie Foster-Bowles,
here is our story, based on your idea "horse story with no riding."
Magic
She knew she was
not supposed to be out here. Not alone anyway. But how long did anyone think
they could keep her from coming back? The grass was damp, chilled her bare
feet. If they knew she'd come barefoot to the back pasture, well they'd have
something to say about that too. It's not like they had been apart all these
months, but in the barn with father and sister worrying about every step, every
move was not the same as being with him alone. The accident wasn't his fault.
The trail had simply given way. She shuddered when she thought of the long
fall.
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It was early. The
sun had just begun to peek above the horizon forcing its way through the
clouds. But it had been necessary to sneak out early, before father headed for
the barn. He'd been so worried, so, she smiled when she finished the thought,
bothersome with his loving attendances to her every need.
Nodding, smiling
as if to reassure herself, she said out loud, "I told myself, today would
be the day." She missed their time together. The quiet moments just being
horse and person enjoying each other's company. He had always been her teacher.
Her best friend. Her strength. All along he'd carried her. Even from the
beginning, way back when she first started riding and father had worried that
her condition made riding too dangerous. She laughed, "We showed them all,
didn't we, Magic?" She'd named him that the first day. His heart was like
magic to her. His strength made her feel strong. Strong enough to run with the
wind, although even before the fall, running was not something she did well.
"But together we can fly!" Became her chant.
She'd heard him
calling for her those first weeks while she lay in the bed too broken to even
be wheeled to the barn. Tears filled her eyes when she remembered his nicker
the first day father pushed her chair to the barn.
The visits had
not been frequent enough, not for him, and not for her. How was she supposed to
heal, get strong, cooped up in a stuffy old house far from her strength. She'd
begged for more visits, but it had been a very cold and damp spring and the
doctor had expressed great concern. So visits to the barn had been limited to
only the few sunny days. Not nearly enough, scarcely a day a week, then only
short visits.
He would be just
over the rise, in the hollow they loved so much, among the tall trees. Their
very own playground. Her walker was difficult to maneuver in the long grass.
She looked over her shoulder, back to the house. Seeing no one, and feeling
brave, stronger than she had in months, she positioned the walker off to her
side, took a shaky step. All on her own. Needles shot through her back, but she
stood. She couldn't resist. She cupped her hands to her face, and with all her
strength screamed, "Magic."
She lost her
balance, tumbled into the wet grass, but managed another call on her way down.
Then a giggle. "Oops." She'd tipped her walker over. Getting up would
be a struggle without her walker. She lay on her back, searching the sky for a
little light, but the clouds were thick. "Don't you rain on me." She
pointed a threatening finger to the gray sky.
She managed to
roll onto her stomach and prop herself up on her elbows. "Magic, I could
use a little help here, before father finds me." Her voice broke off in a
giggle. "He's gonna have a lot to say about this." It hadn't seemed
this cold when she left the house, but she was cold now. Maybe this hadn't been
such a great idea. Her legs had pins and needles, even her hands ached.
"Come on body, deal with it," she ordered. She'd had a lifetime of
ordering her body to obey her commands.
So absorbed was
she in barking commands to her body, she didn't notice Magic until he nickered.
He stopped just ten feet away, eyes and ears glued on her. His eyes so big, his
ears tilted so forward, she had to laugh. "Come here you big beautiful boy
… I could use a hand. Or neck."
Magic lowered his
head to her. She grabbed his mane, and clucked. He backed one step, a game they
had often played, helping her to stand. One arm draped over his lowered neck,
slowly, step by step they started for the barn. Her plan had been for a little
playtime in the hollow, or at least a longer visit, but a slow walk together
would not only have to do, it would do wonderfully. She could see lights on in
the house. "Uh oh," she told Magic. "You might need to help
explain this to father."
Gitty Up ~ Dutch
Henry
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