Howdy Folks,
I was talking
with a friend the other day and she asked me if I used an outline when I wrote
a novel. I don't. She wondered how I kept on track. I told her, "I don't
know, I just write." Some authors create detailed outlines from start to
finish, before they write their opening paragraph. One of my favorite authors,
Tony Hillerman said he wrote partial outlines. He'd outline where he wanted the
story to go for a few chapters, write those chapters than do another short
outline. But he wrote mysteries. I wonder if that makes a difference?
Did you know I'd
queried Mr. Hillerman for my first novel, "Tom Named By Horse?" He
was not only an author, but a literary agent too. Some agents never respond,
others use a form letter rejection, and a few will offer advice. Mr. Hillerman
was the latter, and while his advice was brief, it was very helpful and I think
changed totally how I write. Sadly he had passed away by the time "We'll
Have The Summer" was ready to query. In a small way Anaba in my novel, is
a hat tip to Mr. Hillerman. Anaba would have been in the story regardless, but
I gave extra care in my writing those scenes, for Mr. Hillerman.
How do I keep
track without an outline? Before I write a novel, or a short story, or an
article for a magazine I have in mind the theme, the color, the emotions of the
story. And the beginning, middle and end. Short stories and articles can be
tough to get the flow and cadence just right because they are, well, short. I
ponder just what I want to cover, and the pace, then write. I read over what I
wrote as I go, and even do a lot of my editing as I write the first draft. Most
folks advise against that, but it feels best for me.
For a novel, I do
the same thing. I know the feeling of the story. I know the beginning, middle
and end. I see the whole story much like you see a movie in your mind after
you've watched it. Or a book after you've read it.
I know the main
characters at the beginning, others will come along, and I start writing. Some
authors make character lists of each character, height, weight, eyes and hair
colors. How they speak and entire bios. I've never done that. I'm afraid it
will be too technical for me, too structured. But I do see how it could be helpful.
So you might want to give it a try.
So I just start
writing. Then what? When I'm on a novel in serious mode, I write 1 to 2,000
words a day. I don't write every day. As I said I do a lot of review and
thinking as I go. Since I type holding a pencil, one letter at a time, 20 words
or less a minute, my mind has plenty of time to review. (You're supposed to
chuckle there.) When I start the next day, I read everything I wrote the
previous day. It gives me my launch for the day. A little helpful hint, when you read and review, read out loud, as if you're reading to someone. If you stumble over a word or sentence, so will your reader.
Funny thing about
me and writing, I can leave a novel lay, pick it up, read the last few pages
I've written and be right back in it, on track, on story.
So whatever your
fancy, outline or not, character bios or just writing from your heart, it's what
works for you that's best.
Gitty Up
Dutch Henry
Great blog, Dutch. I'm like you when it comes to outlining...almost by the seat of the pants type of writer, but it works for me.
ReplyDeleteAnd of course, I love your horses....
I don't outline either, but with my current work in progress, I wrote detailed bios of the main characters. Didn't use everything of course, but helped me to get to know them much eaerlier.
ReplyDeleteSuch great advice and I guess they call this being a "pantser" - which I am as well. I do a rough outline, mostly in my head, then I run with it. I just joined your website. I own a Friesian and love all things "horsey". I look forward to reading your posts.
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Thanks Novelist and mmurfy68! Thanks for reading & commenting and keep writing!
ReplyDeleteLove those Frieians, Patricia! I'm a TWH (barefoot) fellow myself, but those Friesians are beautiful and so loving! Thanks for joining us here at the Coffee Clutch! ... Had a question on Facebook about today's post that I'll post about tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteDutch I love your mini courses into the workings of your mind. Could you please elaborate on pace...
ReplyDeleteThanks for asking Darlene! ... Pace in writing, for me is the speed or tempo of the page, scene or even chapter. When writing, it is important to consider your story, how you want to show it, but also we must remember our reader. We must move along in a pace that will sometimes carry the reader, other times hurry the reader. And when necessary slow our readers down. Give them a chance to catch their breath. (did you feel the pace right there?) ... We do this by sentence length and content, punctuation, and yes sometimes poor grammar. You may have noticed I'm a fan of sentence fragments. Like this! But each word, sentence, paragraph and chapter must not only tell the story, but set the pace for the reader. It might be compared to the musical score of a movie, but since we don't have music playing in our written word, our written word must be our score. We must do it with our words. ...
ReplyDeleteWhere can we get that first book of yours? I'm intrigued by the title alone!
ReplyDeleteWell Robynne I never published Tom Named By Horse, it is the first book of a trilogy that sits in my computer's brain waiting. I wrote it in '06. Funny you should ask that question, I'm just about to talk about that trilogy and my plans for it. I hope to get my thoughts straight and blog about it this week yet. That's my plan anyway. So, please stat tuned.
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